Klimt Drawings

I am currently in art A2, and really struggling to write essays.
I just want to know what you think and what you think I need to move?
Thank you:)


The technique is a method of working with art materials to produce a work of art, drawing or painting. The techniques used by ink pen Gustav Klimt, Dan Bennion, Antonio Gaudi and Egon Schiele had a great influence on me. Antonio Gaudi's work is essentially the area of architecture, while Dan Bennion, Gustav Klimt and Egon Schiele's work are mainly paintings and drawings.

My goal is to use and show the same technique, but with different media, showing how different media work better than others and who work well together.
Antonio Gaudi used when ink sketches his ideas and plans for its architecture, Gustav Klimt used ink and couples in love - 1905, Dan Bennion produced a series of drawings of a woman with very little details, without a voice, using ink, but produces a background, and Egon Schiele combined two mediums including ink, most of his works were naked people, stressing the body with ink .

The artists have given me an insight into what works and different ways of using the ink support, I was using the grid method in black majority in my drawings, because it defines the forms of the building and creates a "discouraging atmosphere around the church. I knew it would be difficult to produce something as big as A2 and the use of the medium of ink, because it would be very expensive time, and he could not have the same effect as taking it the production of small, so I tried it with the ladder and use the same technique, and found that it lacked the illustrator look or influence it, I used the same techniques, but with oil paint, to see if the technique could work on a larger scale, I am pleased with the outcome, but hard to start, because I do not know how to apply the technique, as I had been with inks. I started experimenting with pastels and defined edges with ink to highlight the design elements, I found that using color attracted more attention to drawing, to go further with the color, I experimented with watercolors, but found that the ink looked overwhelming against him, and there was not much to the texture it This experience has been influenced by Egon Shiel. My ideas to present techniques are a triptych ... ..

Search Gaudi gave me inspiration to look for other types of buildings rather than the Christian church, such as mosques, Buddhist temples, cathedrals and abbeys. I visited the ruins of Whitby Abbey, and I did quick sketches of sections of the abbey, and it gave me the inspiration to do something great, that the abbey was huge .
Since I started drawing a religious building, I wanted my drawings to have more depth to him, it was not just art, it was also on the performances, and I want to show the links in religious buildings and the religion itself, I tried to portray through my work, but it is difficult to explain ....

Firstly, I never use the pronouns I, "" me "or" my "in an essay. You can give the same impression of your notice by the wording in a different way. For example, for the second - "My goal is to ..." could be: "The purpose of this essay is to show how different mediums can change a work using the same technique.

In the following sentence "Antonio Gaudi ..." The language is everywhere and is not punctuated correctly. It could be something like: "Some of the artists who used shrewd ink as a medium of choice are: Antonio Gaudi in his architectural drawings; Gustav Klimt in" One Love "(1905) set the summary Dan Bennion 'a woman without tones and study the life of Egon Schiele, comb.